It's that time of the year again - the Penprints Flash Fiction Dash! The amazing Rosalie Valentine organizes this fun challenge. She sends out the prompt, and participants have to use it to create a flash fiction piece (under 1000 words).
For the record, I really stink at flash fiction. And I also forgot that I even had to write this. So I wrote this while sitting on the floor of a hotel restaurant and decided not to edit because I'd already set myself up for failure as it is.
But enjoy it anyway.
My Prompt. |
People tease me because I never
wear armor.
I
laugh off yet another wide-eyed squire. “I was too fast to get hit!
Metal plates and chain mail only slow me down!”
People
also think I’m mad.
Perhaps
they’re right.
Martha
always said we had to do our best to protect ourselves, but all the
protection she wore didn’t stop the Red Queen from killing her. And
I walked away alive.
“Sir
Thomas!” The squire refuses to leave me be. “How come I have to
wear my breastplate? They won’t let me spar without it. But you
went into battle with just your shield the day we won the war. I want
to be like you!”
I
tugged crooked, scarred fingers through my hair—or what was left of
it. Old age pulled away more of me as the years whirled on. “I’m
the Chosen One, boy. The prophecy said I would live, and so I did.”
He
raised a dark eyebrow. “You could jump off a cliff and still live?
Just because of some words on a scroll that said it?”
“Yes.
No. Probably.” I flapped a hand in his direction. “I don’t pay
much attention to the prophecy. It’s been fulfilled. Over and done.
Not that it was very informative to begin with. Didn’t even cover
half of what really had to happen for us to win the war.”
“Really?
What happened?”
I
should have kept my mouth shut. With a nod to the squire, I jabbed my
hat on my head, gathered my scrolls, and marched off as best I could
with my limp.
Thirty
years I’d run, but now I could barely manage a lively trot. Yet
another thing the Red Queen had taken from me.
“You
can’t just mumble something and leave. I have to know!” The
squire grabbed my elbow, and I twisted on my heel, staring right into
his mismatched eyes. Strange eyes. Blue like the sky melding with
brown, like when the horizon bent to touch freshly-plowed earth.
The
scrolls tumbled from my grip.
“Confounded
prophecies and their specifics!”
With
a rushed apology, the squire scooped up the scrolls, but I only cared
about one—the small little scrap, with loopy, drunken handwriting.
I pushed the squire away for a moment, shifted my weight to my good
leg, and scanned the lines again.
“Black-hearted
blackguards! It’s the right one!” I lowered the scroll and stared
at the squire again. “Who are your parents?”
He
shrugged, adjusting his grip on the handful of scrolls. “They’re
dead. Long dead.”
The
corner of my mouth lifted in a grin. “Got any friends?”
“Yeah.
A few.”
“Say
goodbye to them now.” I closed the scroll. “Because you, my boy,
are the next Chosen One. Read for yourself.”
He
took the offered scrap, scanned the lines, and narrowed those
foretold mismatched eyes. “This is really about me?”
“Of
course. The eyes. The lack of parents. Growing up as a squire in the
household of the King. Perfect for leading Antrelle to her next
victory.”
“Me?”
“Yeah,
you.” I took a step forward and stopped. Botheration.
If he’s the Chosen One, that makes me the teacher. The
one who guides him to his path of greatness. The one who dies.
“Do you have a sweetheart?”
“What’s
that got to do with this?” The squire’s ears burned red. “That’s
none of your business!”
I
tugged the chain around my neck, the engagement ring barely weighing
down the twisted metal that kept it forever close. “Tell her you
love her. Sooner. Don’t wait. Or you may never have the chance.”
“Does
that...what does the prophecy
say? Am I going to die?”
He flung his hands in the air, sending
scrolls flying across the
hall. “Sir Thomas, what
do you mean?”
“You’re
the Chosen One, boy. You’re not going to die. Read the prophecy.”
~~*~~
“Why
aren’t you wearing armor?”
I
opened my mouth, but the usual answer died on my lips.
Corran,
the Chosen One, stared down at me from atop his battle stallion. His
mismatched eyes took in my tunic, jerkin, battered shield. “Do you
have a death wish, Sir Thomas?”
A
flash of metal on his left hand caught my attention, but he blushed
and slipped his fingers into his stallion’s mane.
“So
you asked her? Good.” I ran my fingers along Martha’s chain. The
blood had long been cleaned
off of it, but sometimes I thought I could still smell her perfume.
“You
don’t have to come with me,” Corran tilted his head towards the
battlefield. “This isn’t your story anymore. It’s my
prophecy.”
I
closed my eyes. “I’m done running, Corran. It’s time for me to
be a human again, and meet my end like everyone else.”
If
it’s my time, then it’s my time. After all, I was The Chosen One.
And I know my story.
Hope you liked it! Don't forget to skip over to Rosalie's blog in a few days and check out her wrap-up post. Loads and loads of Flash Fiction to read!!
Aaaaaaaand, this is when I realize that the reason I didn’t get Rosalie’s email was because I forgot to send in the Google Form. *countless facepalms* Oh well. Next year!
ReplyDeleteBut that aside, this story is amazing, Julian! I love this twist on the Chosen One trope. <3333
Whoops...well, you can still enjoy reading everyone else's stories!
DeleteI loved this so much!! I almost thought it might be some Duren fanfic, but it wasn't. Anyway, it was really good for not having been edited!
ReplyDeleteBelieve me, the idea of writing some Duren fanfic crossed my mind...
DeleteWow, good job! I really love that, good job using those tropes. Also, I love that prompt.
ReplyDeleteThanks! I'm not a fan of Chosen One stories, but this was fun to write anyway!
DeleteWhat do you mean you stink at flash fiction??? This was AWESOME!!
ReplyDeleteTHANK YOU!!
DeleteWow, pleasantly morbid ;p
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Haha! Didn't intend it to be that way, just kinda happened...
Delete*blink blink blink* For being unedited, this is sure good, Julian!!! Awesome job, girl!! ^^
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DeleteCool story!
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What a great piece! I'm SO INTRIGUED by these characters. You have a way of drawing readers in, girl. Keep it up! :]
ReplyDeleteAwwww thanks! :)
DeleteOh. My. GOSH. Julian this was amazing!!!!!!!!! Now we need to see a whole BOOK along this storyline ;-)
ReplyDeleteHaha, maybe someday, once allll the other WIPs are finished. :)
DeleteI'm just... kind of in love with this story. I say HOGWASH to you "not being able to write flash fiction". This is perfect.
ReplyDeleteThanks!!! (And thank YOU for putting on the Dash every year!)
DeleteThis is perfection. xD Characters being aware of their genre's tropes is awesome. xD
ReplyDeleteIKR? And the Chosen One trope is one of my least favorites...
DeleteOOp- that prompt sounds like a mother and son...
ReplyDeleteWowwww, I love the twist you gave that story...very clever!
Yeah, I kinda got that feeling too. But that's not the story that came out. Somehow.
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